Hell's Kitchen (U.S.)

Original: "John went to the store to buy a loaf of bread. He also picked up some milk and eggs. After paying for his groceries, he headed back home. Once home, he made himself a sandwich with the bread and poured a glass of milk to go alongside it. He also cooked himself some scrambled eggs for breakfast the next day."

Rewritten: To buy a loaf of bread, John went to the store. Along with the bread, he picked up some milk and eggs. Having paid for his groceries, he headed back home. Upon arriving home, he made a sandwich with the bread and poured a glass of milk to accompany it. Additionally, he prepared scrambled eggs for breakfast the following day.

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